Floating around to places
She is needed
You can sense the desperate
Feelings of young, remarkable
Children wanting an escape
To freedom and adventure
They're practically perfect
In every way
Dying to go outside and play
They'll take a stroll in the park
A ride on enchanted carousels
And tea with penguins
It begins to rain cats and dogs
They're soaked and it's time to go home
Don't want to catch a cold
Here's a tip:
A spoonful of sugar
Helps the medicine go down
You could say it was
Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious
She taught them to find
Positive aspects in life
To also have fun as well
Laughter is key
With her work done
She flies away
In every job
That must be done
There is an element
Of fun.
Good job Emree! I think that your poem is really good and it represents you well. I haven't watched Mary Poppins, but that's what I imagined her to be like. You pick a good allusion.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem. I really liked how your poem is really straight forward about what your allusion and how its not to hard to tell what it is :).
ReplyDeleteGreat job Em! It's evident that you are alluding to Mary Poppins and having read your poem I think you did a great job of telling her story. You are definitely the go-to advice giver who is always positive and caring. The only suggestion I have is to include more details on your personal experiences.
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