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Hello parents of me, please take a look at my 1st semester sophomore portfolio and answer these questions in the comments below. Thanks!
-me
1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing what would you like to see me improve on?
3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice, and sentence fluency) do you feel was most successful for me?
4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
1. The piece of writing i liked best in your portfolio is the article about the use of cell phones, and social media amongst teens now days. i agree on the idea of social media taking away the practice of communicating face to face and expressing oneself through voice tones and the emphasizing of certain words.
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3. i really enjoyed reading your article. Your organization and ideas were good. The flow was good.
4. i would like to see you improve on proper punctuation and word choice in the coming semester.