I watch her as she pours the chicken broth into the pot; cuts the crunchy carrots, lightly salted araimo (Japanese potato), juicy mushrooms, and golden daikon and adds them to the steaming pot of knotted soaked konbu (seaweed). She told me while she's makes nishime, memories flash before her eyes, "When I was a little girl, my siblings and I would play outside and watch the fireworks at our grandparents house. When the show ended, we would race to the rugged house and try to get the first bowl of nishime.". As I look into the pot I see a wonderful mixture of fresh, cooked vegetables and juicy meats!
Once all the guests arrived and gathered around the table, my grandma brought out her gigantic pot of nishime. All you could hear were "Oo's" and "Ahh's". I was the 5th person in line for grandma's once-a-year nishime. Holding my ceramic bowl, my hands start shaking eager to taste all the delectable ingredients and flavors.
GOOD START, YOU NEED TO ACTUALLY TELL US WHAT NISHME IS BECAUSE NOT EVERYONE KNOWS WHAT IT IS. YOU ALSO NEED TO EXPLAIN MORE AND WHY THIS DISH IS SO SPECIAL TO YOU AND ALSO YOUR FAMILY. ADD WHY YOU LIKE IT TO HELP SHOW WHY YOU CHOSE THIS DISH AND NOT OTHERS. ALSO TRY TO ADD MORE SENSORY DETAIL ON THIS DISH. AS(2)
ReplyDeleteThis is really good but i think you should explain what the dish.
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